Meribeth Hutto
the artist often known as Susannah Dean
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poem (c) 2008 by Meribeth Hutto
used by permission (thank you!)
to visit the artist on MySpace: http://www.myspace.com/cigarettes_n_coffee
free fall off the brain wheel (by Meribeth Hutto)
27 Sunday Jul 2008
Posted 2000s, American, Hutto (Meribeth), Writing
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Christina Brooks said:
Wow!!! Now I understand why you want to include a few of her pieces in your online library. I could feel this…. in a really big way. Thanks for posting this…
SmileyTD (Trina) said:
Wow- I LOVE this poem! It expresses feelings that I often have (and in a very well-written fashion). Thank you for sharing. π
meribeth said:
thank you π
Dianne Borsenik said:
Very nice, mb– I really liked the title (and the meaning of it, in your poem); and I love the way your visual poetry represents your way of speaking, while it prompts the reader to “lean in closer to listen”… I’m really happy that JC is posting these poems in his library, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Christina Brooks said:
I agree with Dianne…. I hope you post more of her work… Bravo mb… π
Mandi said:
I love this my MB! I think my favorite part is the giant POPS in my head! β€
meribeth said:
thank you chris. π i think this is a universal feeling for many people.
meribeth said:
thank you trina. these things frequently just pop into my head, so to say.
meribeth said:
wow dianne, thank you! i love the way you worded this comment.i do have a few more pieces i’ve written on my own blog, but quite a few of them are posted weekly on will northerner’s invitational blogs here:http://www.myspace.com/willnortherner2i appreciate your feedback.how did you get html to work here? every time i try it, it doesn’t work.
meribeth said:
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meribeth said:
that you my mandi! there’s a sound effect that goes with that POPS π β€
meribeth said:
ummmm… that should be thank you, not that you…
Jesus Crisis said:
You’re welcome!
meribeth said:
i just noticed your clock is fixed. when did that happen?
Dianne said:
just used plain and i…nothing fancy…